Interim Critique Feedback 16/04/13

Interim Critique Feedback 16/04/13

Here are screenshots of the work I presented:

Here are the main points from my critique:

• Make something other than posters e.g. zine, booklet, leaflet
• How else to get people to pay attention-colour?
• Shock factor-more shocking
• Installation-bunting?
• Poster where text is gradually taken off
• Add charities logo to poster-so there is something for people who want to get involved with it
• Trail of posters? With more and more text missing
• Sob stories-own personal story?

I thought my crit could have gone better, could have gone worse. I think the main thing I need to do is expand my project a bit, maybe look at making a booklet or zine, or more installation like bunting or posters that are more than just posters.